Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Barbara Boxer Outsourcing Political commercial against Carly Fiorina might be misleading.


One of the things I do as a commercials consultant is look for authenticity in the spoken word. In this "Outsourcing" commercial by The Barbara Boxer campaign, it appears to me that Carly Fiorina's comments have been stitched together from two or three separate moments in time to make them appear as one flowing statement.

You can't do that, Barbara Boxer!

If the Fiorina campaign had hired me for their campaign, I would have notified them as soon as this commercial hit the airwaves that this commercial might just be fraud.

The additional irony is if the Fiorina campaign did not immediately move to protest this outsourcing video, then maybe she is not the kind of politician we want in office because she was slow to react to what appears to be an obvious misrepresentation of what she is being accused of saying. If she did protest, then I apologize, it's just that I have not heard of any protest over the Barbara Boxer Outsourcing video.

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1 comment:

Alessandro Machi said...

Several months ago I started a blog called My Third Party specifically to encourage voting for independent political candidates rather than simply choosing a republican or a democrat.

Something to think about, no?

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